The latest installment of my featured novel “Relentless” is here!
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WHAT IS “RELENTLESS” ABOUT?
“Relentless” propels readers through the thrilling journey of Abi Spencer and her fiercely loyal friend Winn Starr as they confront a perilous world rife with hidden agendas and unyielding foes. Maxwell Thrasher, with his insidious technological implant threatening humanity’s very existence, is recklessly advancing the untested device, fully aware of its malevolent intent and catastrophic potential. With unwavering resolve, Abi and Winn team up with Dr. Caroline Kramer and Coop Kennedy, racing against time to devise bold strategies that will thwart Thrasher’s sinister plans, plunging them into a complex web of intrigue, betrayal, and an inspiring battle for survival against staggering odds.
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RELENTLESS – D.S. FACTOR
Chapter Twenty-Two
Maxwell Thrasher sat alone in the pressurized hush of the MA1 Gulfstream, his hands folded beneath the dim glow of a biometric monitor. The world outside was midnight and glass—Europe shrinking beneath the wings, the Atlantic waiting ahead. His empire was airborne, borderless, invisible.
On the monitor before him, neural readouts pulsed in real time—biometric echoes from the implant network. Each ping, each data point, was a life connected. Twenty-three world leaders tracked. Eleven showing predictable shifts in sleep and cognitive rhythm. Five flagged for abnormal behavioral latency. One had flatlined.
Olivia Johnson.
The chart still held her signature in faint gray—the final arc before compliance. Thrasher watched her last recorded neural impulse loop on repeat. From hesitation to stillness. From doubt to acceptance. He’d tweaked nothing; the signal had followed protocol. A seamless override.
Three minutes, thirty-seven seconds.
Direct influence verified.
Cause of death: voluntary cessation of safety protocol.
The experiment had been a success.
Thrasher tapped a command, purging her profile from the main index. He didn’t need data from a completed subject. What he needed now was progression.
His assistant, Reeves, entered silently and stood near the edge of the cabin. “The media narrative is holding, sir. No implant mentions. Cause remains speculative.”
“Let them speculate,” Thrasher said.
“There’s preliminary backlash. Eastern European delegates pulled statements. Independent networks are analyzing signal irregularities.”
Thrasher leaned back, eyeing the signal drift diagram. “They’ll find anomalies. They’re supposed to.”
“Shall I initiate counter-narratives?”
“No. Let doubt seed quietly. Suspicion destabilizes trust—but not in me. In each other.” He watched the waveform sync between devices. “I don’t need them to worship me, Reeves. I need them to second-guess their own minds.”
The assistant paused. “And Thorne’s team? Their data burst has replicated faster than expected.”
Thrasher gave a thin smile. “They think revealing my methods will dismantle me. But they’re still thinking in terms of truth. That’s their weakness.”
He stood and walked toward the wide console at the cabin’s helm. A map of the United States glowed beneath his fingers, layered with markers: telecom nodes, health system touch-points, government supply chains. The foundation had been set long before Paris.
Phase Two Deployment: Initiated.
Behavioral Influence Modules: Active.
U.S. Network Migration: 42% complete.
“They’ll return there,” Thrasher said. “They have to. The story started there. Emotion will drag them back.”
“And when they do?” Reeves asked.
Thrasher stared at the implant schematic hovering above the screen—its perfect symmetry, its undetectable weight.
“When they do,” he said softly, “we’ll begin Phase Three.”
Outside, the jet banked eastward. The turbulence was light, but the world below churned with implications they hadn’t yet seen.
And above it all, Maxwell Thrasher watched, listened, and re-calibrated—one thought, one leader, one nation at a time.
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