The latest installment of my featured novel “Relentless” is here!
I am excited to release this novel in small parts, pulling readers into the captivating chaos of the story! Years ago, I was amazed by Stephen King’s bold storytelling in “The Green Mile,” where he shared each part like a thrilling tease over time, and now I want to continue that exciting tradition with Moteventure!
WHAT IS “RELENTLESS” ABOUT?
“Relentless” propels readers through the thrilling journey of Abi Spencer and her fiercely loyal friend Winn Starr as they confront a perilous world rife with hidden agendas and unyielding foes. Maxwell Thrasher, with his insidious technological implant threatening humanity’s very existence, is recklessly advancing the untested device, fully aware of its malevolent intent and catastrophic potential. With unwavering resolve, Abi and Winn team up with Dr. Caroline Kramer and Coop Kennedy, racing against time to devise bold strategies that will thwart Thrasher’s sinister plans, plunging them into a complex web of intrigue, betrayal, and an inspiring battle for survival against staggering odds.
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RELENTLESS – D.S. FACTOR
Chapter Sixteen
The room held its breath as Eli Thorne stepped into the spotlight, his voice cutting cleanly through Maxwell Thrasher’s booming speech. “Ladies and gentlemen,” Thorne announced, his words laden with purpose, “the truth Maxwell Thrasher has kept hidden ends today.”
Gasps rippled through the crowd, their focus shifting entirely to the man who dared to disrupt the gilded veneer of the Global Economic Forum. Thrasher froze for a moment, his mouth a perfect, silent “O” of surprise. But the panic didn’t last long.
Coolly, almost imperceptibly, Thrasher gestured to his security team. A second later, Thorne’s microphone crackled and died, his final words swallowed by silence. The crowd murmured in confusion as Thrasher stepped forward, his presence dominating the room.
“Impressive theatrics,” Thrasher said, his voice calm but brimming with menace. “But let’s talk about the real story here.” His smile was razor-sharp, slicing through the tension with unnerving precision.
The massive screens surrounding the stage blinked to life, bathing the room in a cold, blue light. Footage began to play—a perfectly edited reel of supposed “evidence” painting Thorne and his team as anarchists bent on chaos. A fabricated video showed Thorne planting explosives in a corporate headquarters. False documents scrolled across the screen, implicating his team in cybercrimes they hadn’t committed.
“What you see here,” Thrasher continued, addressing the crowd with the same air of authority that had brought him to power, “is the true nature of Eli Thorne and his accomplices. Vigilantes masquerading as saviors, attempting to dismantle the very systems that sustain our progress.”
The room teetered on the edge of believing him. Faces twisted in doubt and hesitation as Thrasher’s words wormed their way into the cracks of their convictions. Thorne’s team, hidden among the crowd, began to realize the magnitude of the trap they’d walked into.
From their makeshift command center, Coop and Caroline scrambled. “We’re being locked out,” Caroline said, panic lacing her voice. “Every system is flooding with countermeasures—we can’t regain control.”
Brad’s voice broke through the comms, strained and hurried. “Security’s closing in on our location. We’ve got to pull out, now.”
Thorne, still frozen on the stage, locked eyes with Thrasher. The CEO’s gaze was triumphant, his trap tightening like a noose. Thorne knew when he was outplayed. For now.
Retreating from the stage, Thorne melted into the crowd, his mind already racing. Thrasher had won this battle, but the war was far from over. If anything, this loss had only steeled his resolve.
The atmosphere in the conference room shifted from murmurs of uncertainty to an electric, almost reverent silence. Maxwell Thrasher stood at the center of it all, his commanding presence amplified by the glowing screens that filled the space. His fabricated evidence against Eli Thorne had done its work; skepticism toward the activist had rippled through the audience. Thrasher’s victory seemed complete—until he unveiled his next bold move.
“Ladies and gentlemen,” Thrasher began, his voice smooth and measured, “we stand on the precipice of the greatest technological advancement in human history. The subdermal technology you’ve heard about is no longer a distant possibility. It is here. It is now.”
The lights dimmed, and a holographic projection appeared above him, illustrating the sleek, grain-sized implant in exquisite detail. The animation showcased its seamless integration into the human body, connecting individuals to a global network. The benefits, according to Thrasher, were limitless—instant communication, enhanced security, even real-time health monitoring.
“To usher in this new era,” he continued, his gaze sweeping across the room, “we, as leaders, must set the example. It begins with us.”
There was a pause, heavy with anticipation. Then, one by one, assistants entered the room, each carrying a small, sterile case. Inside were the implants, ready to be inserted live during the conference. The audience gasped audibly as Thrasher explained the procedure would be painless and quick, a mere formality before history was made.
“This is not just a demonstration,” Thrasher said, his voice rising with conviction. “This is a commitment—a commitment to transparency, unity, and progress. Together, we will show the world that we are ready to embrace the future.”
The leaders of the 25 nations exchanged uneasy glances. Some looked inspired by Thrasher’s rhetoric, while others wore expressions of doubt or outright distrust. But Thrasher anticipated resistance. His assistants were already handing out contracts, polished to perfection, emphasizing the voluntary nature of the implantation while subtly underscoring the political consequences of refusal.
“With this implant,” Thrasher declared, “we lead by example. We demonstrate trust in the technology that will unite our world. The decision is yours—but the eyes of the global community are watching.”
The room erupted in hushed, urgent whispers. Would these leaders comply willingly, or would the pressure of public expectation force their hands? And what of Thorne and his team, now watching helplessly from the sidelines, grappling with their defeat? Could they disrupt this unprecedented moment—or had Thrasher’s machinations silenced them for good?
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